I love Erza so it was strange to see her like this, but it was very shocking how good it is. If I had to find one flaw though, I would have to tell you to make her look stronger. She should be hard looking and rugged, she looks kind of "soft" in this drawing, but it was amazing anyways. The technique is impressive, you did a great job at making it look professional and very convincing, but I didn't feel as moved over this drawing as I did when this scene occurred in the anime. This was an impressive view on this character, but I have to say that it should reflect Erza's character better.
it is a very nice and the art style is very good. i do like how unique it is the only thing i don't really like is that it needs to be a little more color, the color is a little dull the background should be a little more red but i don't know that might be what you were going for but nonetheless it is a great piece i think it is one of the best works i've seen lately on deviantart so that is my opinion of this piece of artwork i hope you like what i said